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I'm Not Going Away by ~PumpkinBumpkin:iconPumpkinBumpkin:

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I knew right away from the dawn's first rays
That time was on a pedestal
Morning comes to greet me,and will not fade
No one knows my plans for today

My love and I go walking around the bend
The floral air is sweet
As is the smile of my love,my love
Whom in the sunshine I meet

Lend an ear and I'll tell you everything
Only one knows just how I'm a-feeling today
You may dream and wander, driving away the days
Here I'll be,staying right here,I'm not going away

Now all my friends,from a dream they've returned
Nothing to show for the miles they've earned
All they say is just stick 'round here
Theres nothing out there you haven't got near

Lend an ear and I'll tell you everything
Only one knows just how I'm a-feeling today
You may dream and wander, driving away the days
Here I'll be,staying right here,I'm not going away

I knew that night was aloof
I knew the sun was right around that bend
I waited in the warm, whispery night
Then the morning birds sang a hymn so soft

Lend an ear and I'll tell you everything
Only one knows just how I'm a-feeling today
You may dream and wander, driving away the days
Here I'll be,staying right here,I'm not going away
Oh I'm not going away
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Submitted: May 17, 2008
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I sat down and wrote part of this song the other day and I finally got it to where I liked it. The chorus was the hardest part to write,it usually is for me. :giggle: Let me know what you think!

Enjoy! :peace: & :heart:
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~Clerby:iconClerby: May 17, 2008, 3:19:38 PM
I really like this, espeically the first two lines.

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I’ve always walked in straight lines because I was taught to walk that way.
But there’s something about a jaunty stride that tempts me to transgress
And take the winding road.
~PumpkinBumpkin:iconPumpkinBumpkin: May 17, 2008, 5:17:37 PM
Thank you very much,I'm glad you liked it. :)

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And if there is eternity I'd love you there again.:heart:
-Bob Dylan
~Demra:iconDemra: May 17, 2008, 8:41:49 PM
It's good :hug:

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"Some drink to forget I drink because I can never forget."
~PumpkinBumpkin:iconPumpkinBumpkin: May 17, 2008, 8:47:36 PM
aww thank you josh. :heart:

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And if there is eternity I'd love you there again.:heart:
-Bob Dylan
~Wingspan91089:iconWingspan91089: May 18, 2008, 5:54:14 PM
I like it Morgan! My sister started singing it. :giggle:

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"Art is what you can get away with." -- Andy Warhol
:painter:
~PumpkinBumpkin:iconPumpkinBumpkin: May 18, 2008, 6:40:25 PM
Thankies! :hug:

Really?! That is too funny! :rofl:

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And if there is eternity I'd love you there again.:heart:
-Bob Dylan
~Wingspan91089:iconWingspan91089: May 18, 2008, 8:23:12 PM
Welcomies! :hug:

:lmao: Yeah, she was reading it over my shoulder and was all, "That would make a good song!" And she was singing it. :giggle:

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"Art is what you can get away with." -- Andy Warhol
:painter:
~PumpkinBumpkin:iconPumpkinBumpkin: May 19, 2008, 12:02:44 PM
:lmao: That is too funny! I feel accomplished now! :nod: lol!

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And if there is eternity I'd love you there again.:heart:
-Bob Dylan
~Wingspan91089:iconWingspan91089: May 20, 2008, 11:17:35 AM
:giggle:

--
"Art is what you can get away with." -- Andy Warhol
:painter:
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